Comments of chapter undefined of Rebirth journey: A Xianxia world story

It's a little difficult to find the Nexus of the story, but in general when I'm writing this review there are only two chapters and the author is still new,com um pouco mais de polimento no contexto e a forma como você escreve a história vai realmente ficar bom, I hope you don't give up, I wish you luck and all the best, I probably won't comment much as the story progresses because I forget, but I'll always be following the chapters