Comments of chapter undefined of Naruto: Chronicles of a Fire Ninja

Honestly, I like your story. Though, you can artificially increase your affinity/train a new chakra affinity by doing the nature transformation exercises for the different elements. I would also approve of kenjutsu(super lethal chakra flow with fire and the sharingen for pinpoint accuracy and control) uchiha taijustu(interceptor style) training and more emphasis on shurikenjutsu. But honestly, right now, I just can't afford $5 a month. Though I would suggest posting your wonderful story on Royalroad as well for cross-platform promoting.