Comments of chapter undefined of Dragon Ball Alternative

I like your story and how you wrote the characters but I'm getting a little impatient with this fight, you were dragging it out for the last few chapters and I get that you want to make characters feel more real but this is turning into a parody not a serious story that you potraid in the beginning, and when is Mc going to arrive he's been in telepathic range chapters ago I know to them it's been an hour but he should have been there all ready it's ok to develop characters but it's infuriating waiting so long

The story is so slow :/

Thanks for the Chapter

Tftc

thanks

Thanks for the chapter