Comments of chapter undefined of Dragon Ball Alternative

Now I feel that Dragon Ball characters are stupid and don't know how to fight... That they haven't literally been martial artists since they were children. It was serious... But the parody is seeping into your fanfic stronger and stronger.

not to be mean, but I feel like this fiction is turned into a slog with this arc. not much actually happens just drama, stalling, and uninteresting fights...

I like the 'bad guys' more than the rest.

In Dragon Ball there are few melee moves that combine with ki. An idea could be some pointed ki knuckles or two sharp blades on the knuckles as well. or similar themes, I think it is something that is missing a lot in the series and that has a lot of potential.

thank you teacher nappa for the combat lessons 🫡lol

Great chapter. Loved teacher Nappa

I see now, Piccolo learned from Nappa Tnks for chap

can we keep Nappa?

So about Ajax's body, what will he do? Combine with other wishes like add a regeneration without side effects that improves over time or perhaps make a wish to refresh the body?

Ngl I’m Team nappa

ty for chapter

Thanks for the Chapter.

thanks for the chapter 🔥🔥🔥 Mr. Nappa and Mr. Piccolo are both good teachers gohan just needs to be more willing to learn

thanks

Thanks for the chapter

Loved the chapter! The more I read, the more I want for Nappa to stay around. Same thing with Raditz getting revived. Saiyans are and endangered race, so I could see a wish being used to revive either Raditz, or help them locate living Saiyans. I mean, Raditz and Vegeta heard the dead could be revived with the dragon balls (except for the year limit that would get in the way), so I don’t think it would be too far fetched. Then again, they probably won’t revive Raditz since he died as a warrior. Keep up the great work!

Gran trabajo hasta me gustaría que los dejaras vivir a Nappa y radriz