Pikachu234
feels like a very forced and one-sided conversation (artificial?). hiruzen just explained everything he did without near to no question or reaction from jiraiya. overall, it's an awesome ff, but I think character interactions and giving information to viewers could be better (i mean, i.e the past chapters explanation on lava release and all that, was a fresh air from overused ff ideas).Thanks for the chapter.đ¤