Bro if you literally rewrote this story and ask for a patreon, then you could AT LEAST run it through spellcheck and grammarly.
Just copy paste you chapter to google docs for spell check and grammarly for grammar, it’s not that hard!
BTW meliodas only looks like a child due to the curse that was placed upon him so pls make him actually grow older and not just stay a dwarf as he doesn't have that curse
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Sorry to say but I was really going to stop here when I saw that Mc didn't know anything about the world he was going to and this made me a little frustrated because of it.