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Comments of chapter undefined of Technomancer in MCU

Origin_Saint
Origin_SaintLv13Origin_Saint

Try grammarly, punctuation is important

Rickey_Samanta
Rickey_SamantaLv4Rickey_Samanta

He's behaviour is like a fanboy, what a letdown

scyfly
scyflyLv4scyfly

always dislike a story that starts after all the set up has happened. how did he do it all? the plot needed it but i cant explain so i skipped it. technomancy means control over tech not sudden AI coding skills

LittleRedsWolf
LittleRedsWolfLv5LittleRedsWolf

After reading 33 chapters, I have many questions. How does he get his powers, how did he get to the MCU, when did he get there, how did he develop his technology, where did he stay when he developed his technology. You wrote nothing about the MC's progress or past, you just dumped us into action. If you followed it up with flashbacks or something, it would be less frustrating to read.

Benny_gold
Benny_goldLv4Benny_gold

No character building at all

DarkKnife69TT
DarkKnife69TTLv1DarkKnife69TT

Why do people still not use AI to correct grammar???

Xcalibur_Xc
Xcalibur_XcLv4Xcalibur_Xc

Technomancer from the game series?

Bro_is_bored
Bro_is_boredLv4Bro_is_bored

Try to integrate poltics in it because we already read to much action pack marvel fanfic. try to use bussion building and something diff from norml action pack fanfic.

MukomaTJ
MukomaTJLv1MukomaTJ

Not gonna lie, the pov stuff is giving me whiplash. There's no one to latch on to and apparently stays that way at least well into the 60s? I'll give it a go but...

Will_Snow
Will_SnowLv14Will_Snow

Ignoring the story, all I can focus on is the butchered grammar. The translation isn’t even wrong, but the sentence structure is so bad it could kill Godzilla

FluxleX
FluxleXLv4FluxleX

Do you mean to tell me he developed all of this without being noticed broo is so delusional, so there are no controlled items that the shield keeps a close eye on, and what with the fanboy attitude, as if he was 14 14-year-old teenager?

Insane_Fantasy
Insane_FantasyLv4Insane_Fantasy

tftc~~~○●

eclairsshi
eclairsshiLv4eclairsshi

if he's deploying bots and drones, did he just commands them remotely and talk through them, therefore not needed to actually be there. As Technomancer that would be the smart and safe thing to do

Breno_7
Breno_7Lv1Breno_7

Estou meio perdido além de não conseguir nenhuma conexão com o personagem, a escrita não vejo nenhum problema além de achar a forma como começou meio rígida ou abrupta por assim dizer. Principalmente por não haver nenhuma informação sobre o personagem, como quêm ele é, ou como é quando ele chegou. Fora a questão que definem sua personalidade ou características que podem nós dizer o motivo de ele tentar entrar em uma guerra. Ele é nativo da marvel?, um mutante? Ou um reencarnador com conhecimentos dos quadrinhos. Nem sabemos se ele é um manipulador ou fanboy com desejos de Justiça.

Arcanistis
ArcanistisLv2Arcanistis

Can not understand anything

OverlordBGs
OverlordBGsLv14OverlordBGs

Nice chapter

mth_01
mth_01Lv4mth_01

if you could add a romance in this would be nice

Irishdamned
IrishdamnedLv14Irishdamned

I thank you for the chapter.

malinizgeldii
malinizgeldiiLv1malinizgeldii

A dizzying "yes". I guess just a sexual "yes" can be intoxicating.

reader12143546
reader12143546Lv10reader12143546

Intersting chapter author sama.