Comments of chapter undefined of Constructing-Style Wizard

what's with new novels that almost all of them have issues

You don’t have to always go with the whole name of the main character- just go with „he” / „Nolan” / „Lee” / or sth that is a short characterization like: “the blue-eyed man”

The format distracts from any possible story. Why is THIS recommended?

Fixing the formatting problems made this chapter so much more readable. I enjoyed it properly this time and can give the rest a try. Thank you.

They finally fixed the formatting

If I can just promote my novel. I already did. 😭😭😭.. I'm reading this because of recommendation.. but how this work had recommendations and I never got one. 🤣🤣🤣

Is it possible for you to learn the use of paragraphs and spacing? even if you dedicated a whole 1st chapter to claim you have a great horde of already written chapters , if we can't finish reading the 1st chapter what's the point ?

its hard to read because there no spacing and other stuff. i think as author you need to see other novel first and decided how your writing style that suit your taste and easy to read to people

I reiterate the comments which came before me, in that the formatting done by the translator or editor needs some work. In English it helps tremendously in terms of readability.

all the comments I make in this app for the past 3-6months have the spaces I put in them taken away except for the 12 in this ( @ Y @ ) emoji it could be ginormous eyes's or breasts😏 who knows

eternal suffering

Thanks for the chapter. It's definitely an interesting start!

Terrible situation 😱

Not a bad start