Wait, did I forgot to put a review here???? hahahahaha.. the story is really awesome and the character design are on point base on the story. Anyway keep up the good work! Happy readers, Happy Author!

It's a stab. But in her song, she's telling him to gently push the tip of the knife, slowly but surely. Feeling the pain and agony, both in mind and body. What she feels must also be felt by her twin brother.

thank you 🤧🤧🤧

It's better if you don't remove an honest review. It will help you to improve. So here's my review: your quality writing improves. It's good that you use Grammarly or any related app to fix your grammar. And again, I couldn't properly review your novel; you need to upload more chapters for us to give a proper review, not bullshit reviews. And it will be much better if you update it daily.

currently at the hospital and reading this.. you demon 🤧🤧

Read it plus listen to any horror songs. 😭😈

yaaah.. this kind of concept bugs me for a while now 😅😅

Honest review, first chapter will already tangle you by lady Lucinda to hit the next chapter. The interaction of mother and child (Theodore) was priceless, she'll do anything for his son and he'll do anything for his mother. I also like how the author imagine the dance party, it really caught me to seat in front and watch Lucinda and his dance partner together. (i thought at first they know each other 😅). Anyway the update stability is also perfect! World background can be created with story development so there's no problem with that. Aaaand that's it! I totally recommend this novel. Happy readers, happy author. 🥰🥰❤️

I'm sorry but I'll be honest. I couldn't rate this novel properly because first: it's only has a prologue chapter and this chapter was already written in your synopsis. Second, the lack of spacing thru your paragraphs, third: your updating stability. It's better to put a chapter every day or at least five chapters first, after that I'll give you a proper rating and review.

is this a prologue chapter?

thanks for the review 🥰🥰

I got confused 🤔 why did you merge two chapters? I thought his awake then after absorbing that stone it didn't say the he fell asleep again. 😅 anyway I'm also doing 1st-person POV for the first time, I use this kind of POV on my 3rd chapter. 🥰

I think you can improve this paragraph more.

Quinnkey is here for another shameless review of my novel, "The Suddenly Twins!" Now hear me out for clarification. This novel was originally a female lead but needs to change to a male lead because of the stupid tag of female romance. There's no romance here! Who's the main lead here? There are multiple leads here; the first one is Morana Suddenly; she's a witch who's fascinated by killing people. She's also interested in the word "death" itself. The second one is Cain Suddenly, the twin brother of Morana. A joyful child with a weird personality, he really adores his sister so much that he will accept everything from her and will do what she asks of him. The last one is Jess Salgado, who had a very unique ability to see two different realities at the same time. He is Jess from his current world, and Cain Suddenly from the other magical world. I'm tagging this with horror and psychology. This is a new tag field for me, and I hope I do it right. And also, I'll use this novel to practice different kinds of POVs, plots, genres, tags, and content warnings. And that's all for today. Happy reading!

I didn't no that.. I'm no dancer. 😂

thank you for reading 🥰

i like how you describe the dance. ❤️❤️ i totally imagine it and if It's get animated it's totally jaw dropping ❤️

sorry but .hahahahaha weeding day 😅😅😅

I think Lucinda and Silas are close friends ?

she's still the Villain 🤣🤣🤣