REALMSINUS
interesting story but somewhat lacking in details. how did thanos' children get on earth? you took his powers, gave him a system then gave most of his powers back but not within the limits of the system. so whats the plan? the charactersation could use some work too, a little more flamboyand i guess.
Great story and I havent seen a better portrayal of lucifer or any character recently that was so spot on. Only thing that is lacking is the length of the chapter, it has the quality of a story worth paying to read if that helped the author expand on the chapters to provide more detail, world background, and more scenes.