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Comments of chapter undefined of Tycoon of Video Games

RzeTY
RzeTYLv5RzeTY

bro using ai to right chapter right after 150-200 chapter done

TrojanRabbit
TrojanRabbitLv14TrojanRabbit

Bro.. like 75% of this chapter is word vomit repeated from the last one and just slightly rearranged.

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FluxleX
FluxleXLv4FluxleX

this chapter was a waste.

SR_2027
SR_2027Lv5SR_2027

This and previous chapter was filled with almost all repeating words/dialogue with almost no real content by 80%…

Jvgb
JvgbLv5Jvgb

I feel like the characters are dead, there aren't even any more dialogues or right turning points. Several chapters read like a short internet click bait article. I understand that it takes work to create a story, but it seems like you completely abandoned the idea of polishing it before launching. It might be better to reduce the release frequency to improve quality.

Heavy_Space
Heavy_SpaceLv3Heavy_Space

I don't know if you have already written the next chapters but if not, then you can run an ad campaign where the alpha 01 is smashed through a building or dropped from a very big height, kinda like Mr beast videos...

Florin_7816
Florin_7816Lv11Florin_7816

The sheer amount if things repeating in one chapter , from the company name to people names it utterly annoying and just a filler , it is getting worser by the chapter

Uzumaki_Kushina_21
Uzumaki_Kushina_21Lv5Uzumaki_Kushina_21

it feels more and more MTL novel

_Monarch
_MonarchLv14_Monarch

thanks for the chapter but how does the car look like?

Dark_Symphony
Dark_SymphonyLv4Dark_Symphony

Can we get a reference image

PanzerAFS
PanzerAFSLv5PanzerAFS

Hyuga_Tobirama
Hyuga_TobiramaLv5Hyuga_Tobirama

Thanks for the chapter

Dragaim
DragaimLv4Dragaim

how would a car look like . Ferrari , koensnagg , 🤨🤨

PUERKO_Senpai
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PUERKO_Senpai
PUERKO_SenpaiLv4PUERKO_Senpai

Zzzz

Gum_
Gum_Lv4Gum_

Thanks for the chapter.

WarMachine78
WarMachine78Lv14WarMachine78

Thanks for the chapter

Turista
TuristaLv4Turista

gracias por el capitulo

TrueMonarch00
TrueMonarch00Lv14TrueMonarch00

daniel_rahn
daniel_rahnLv2daniel_rahn

love the progress, keep the good work