NewComer714
Hmmm... I know im not in the position to say this because im not the author and i dont know how to write a novel or fanfiction... But can you like, Make it a little slower i feel like its to fast paced or maybe just add a little chapters of shin's life cause i feel like its been like 10 - 50 chapters (Dont know the exactly) since i last saw a chapter related to kinshin's life.