NewComer714
Hey author, I really like the story good work on that. I just feel like the pace is a bit slow or that the content doesnât feel like 3 chapters but more so 1 split into 3 kinda. Along with that I believe that you are planning an further all where the other two companies will get owned by KiShin but in the off chance u arenât planning anything. The whole KiShin does something, then others copy it, then KiShin faces a bit black lash, which isnât what always happens but it feels like sometimes. Gets repetitive after a well which it currently isnât but just heads up. The major critic is the pace for me currently. So far tho amazing work and donât give up. This is just supposed to be constructive criticism not wanting to make you feel bad. I really like ur book.