NewComer714
TBH.. when i saw this fanfic/novel my first thought was "Have i read this before" and then after a few chaps i was like "Yes you have". And i was like wow, they made the grammar a little bit better.. but since the author said he will change some of the plot i appreciate it because the mtl novel one was good? but the relationship between him and the girl havent explored properly and from what i remembered he didnt sell a car to gain "funds" for his company...Hehe... since this a original novel.. i will request a video game if ever he get into internet video game era. i humble request 'Undertale'.