Comments of chapter undefined of Avatar The Last Airbender: Not Avatar

Partially crippled mc's is always off-putting.

These beginning chapters are really rough. faceless voices squeezing gigantic blocks of exposition from our MC the MCs constant 'edgy' monologs minimal if nonexistent details about literary anything in the world or about the MC other then how his family/village was killed or how he's gonna kill the ones responsible. I'm gonna give it a few more chapters out of good faith but this beginning might be worth a rewrite in the future to stop people less forgiving then me from dropping it in the first few.

Now i understand why someone said emo like thes finfic it's really bad super 💩

The story JUST started and he’s already missing a limb? UGH.

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Neat

TFTC

Great chapter

Thank You For The Chapter ❤️❤️

Thanks

Geez. What a dark backstory.

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