Comments of chapter undefined of The Immortal (twilight fanfiction)
The Immortal (twilight fanfiction)
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I have a question. Hundreds of years have passed since the volturi and they have not been mentioned again. Another separate thing would be if new vampire clans have been formed, which I imagine so. Or so I hope. It wouldn't be any fun if only a few hundred existed. I would also like to see a chapter from the point of view of one of these new, not-so-old vampire clans that see Adam as the Adam of the Bible. That would be epic. And that this visualization of him as that Adam protected his bank so that greedy vampire clans would not want to mess with his banks. Another fun thing would be if the circle saw vampires as the descendants of Cain. And that they trained warriors to protect themselves from these. You should also take some references from Vampire: The Masquerade. For the new clans, the powers they will have. And especially his fear for Adam.
I think the MC needs to get a blood bank and a butcher shop setup. Maybe they could also make animal preserves or something to keep animals from going extinct. And Different types of farms for the butcher and blood bank. (Blood is for Vampires and anyone that needs 2 buy blood? exp: Blood Pudding? ect.) It's going 2 start raising Flags when they Start putting in hunting laws, and animals R dying.
