Comments of chapter undefined of The Immortal (twilight fanfiction)

I already want to see how the circle talks about Adam bringing knowledge to the indigenous tribes. It surely makes colonization easier for them.

long road trips are almost like torture after a while. I grew up in Ontario, Canada and we had relatives in Alberta, so once a year we would pack up 5 or 6 people into a Sedan(car) and drive across Canada for 3 days (around 12 hours of driving each day) to go visit them. for a couple of days then drive back for another 3 days. probably wouldn't have been so bad if I did it now and in a larger vehicle. Back then you had either a gameboy, mp3 player, or as many books as you could pack to tide you over. Cellphones that have all 3 would have been amazing.

Thanks but don’t worry about being pressured to update. As long as you don’t drop it I’ll wait for more chapters. It’s the best twilight novel I’ve read so far. I’ve seen some good but also some very bad ones. One was about a hybrid werewolf vampire that could make vampires have human functions. For some reason the author made every bad thing possible happen to Edward. Super weird anyway thanks can’t wait for more.

Was hoping he’d learn to spirit walk and pick his own animal to turn into.

Thank you for the chapter, I’m glad nothing bad happened to you. I was starting to get worried there for a bit.

Thanks for the chapter

so why has it been 3 days since your last chapter if your back... man you make me cry. can we get a mass release or consistent releases for a couple of weeks? Also do you not have a patreon?

Make him the king of economy... By having Banks or company's related to finance sector such Insurance, Asset management, Holdings, etc. types of company as it would be cool...😆😆😆

thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the Chapter!

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for another great chapter

tftc~~~○●

Thanks for the chapter, welcome back and congratulation.

Mejor que funde su propi país y que deje a EEUU con sus 13 colonias al principio de su imdendensia y que se quede con el resto con Canadá y Alaska pero sobretodo que compre escosia esto último tiene mucho sentido averígualo que se apropie de Italia,fransia y el resto de países Europeos menos España y reino unido pero sobretodo que cree tecnología de su época y que cree más vampiros y que cree híbridos de vampiros barones y hembras humanas y que el mismo tenga hijos propios con mujers humanas y híbridos de vampiro y humanos pero sobretodo que cree algo que de poderes como el compuesto v de the boy al mezclar el veneno de vampiro y su sangre que aún que puede esta puede purificar no puede evitar cualquier cosa que sea beneficiosa como los poderes que octubo luego de ser mordido pero sobretodo que le pasaría a un híbrido si este bebe su sangre y coml diferente sria el mundo entoses

Thanks for the chapter 🙏

Todo bien !!! Solo NO le emparejes con alice !!! Exelente historia

Tftc

Excelente capitulo muchas gracias 👍👌. Quisiera un capitulo sobre Adam con la perspectiva de otros personajes a lo largo del tiempo