Comments of chapter undefined of The Immortal (twilight fanfiction)

Happy we are getting new chapters more often

perfect story as always just wen is his mate gonna come

Thanks for chapter

update

Man I can’t wait. It’s been a while. We’re finally getting some more canon centered stuff.

this is really good to me I love how you explained it it wasn't too complicated simple enough for me to understand and I enjoyed the adventure and like how you add the present to the past thank you and waiting for more chapters[img=update][img=update]

can you give us the the year he's in now it'll give us info about what's happening around that time

I hope that one of the Cullens will be a partner for the main character, it's just the most suitable

best chapter so far.. so interesting

thanks

tftc~~~○● can't wait for more. please update soon.

Thanks for the chapter, hope you will keep up with the good work 🙂

Thanks for chapter

any new chapter

Novel is fun and good 😌😌

dropped?

Siempre q una novela q me gusta lleva mas de una semana sin subir me empiezo a sentir incomoda por todas partes almenos dime q no la vas a abandonar TTwTT