Comments of chapter undefined of The Immortal (twilight fanfiction)

Would live to see Charlisle's Pov as he learns about Adam.

Thanks for the chapter If you are going to the new world are you gonna replay the history of official accounts, like how the Aztecs where betrayed because they were cruel and all that or you are going with the revised account of what happened in the fall of the empire. What I am referring is that in the official History of the Aspect empire are sereval wrong facts that have been changed for political purposes. But recently a new version has come up that tries to bring the truth to light headed by Matthew Pascal if I remember correctly that bring new context to the situation. So the question is are you going with history version or the revised version for the story.

great chapter. Some cool ideas you could include in-between now and the start of canon twilight. Would be great for you to have da Vinci make some artwork with Adam as its focus. Would love to see Adam visit the shapeshifters. Would also love to see Adam become one of the founding fathers and be painted with the rest of them in the declaration of independence painting and/or the signing of the constitution painting as well. (adding to the whole bible Adam walking the earth story for people to find). Maybe have a few chapters where a historian is finding these different findings of Adam existing. (religious historian). Maybe show the Vatican's view or response to finding out about Adam being real or maybe incorporate the Val hellsing movie with the Vatican interacting with Adam.

Like where this is heading

I feel like if Adam is going to go to the new world, he should hang around some of the tribes that are there. If he is going to stick around the south/central America region I think he should be around the azrtecs/mayans or the Inca, mostly because they were more prominent at that time if I remember correctly. For the north America's since there were mostly scattered, I feel it would make more sense for him to be moving around a lot more. Similar to when he first woke in the world.

Here we go boys!!! Were touching upon America and the cullens. Which should mean the tribes of werewolf’s as well.

dude one of a kind novel i support you novel artist to keep going this is one of the best novel i read you have great talent thank you for writing this novel

Thanks for the chap and cant wait to see what Adam does in the New World. Also curious will Julius and Jane build there own coven. I ask because it be cool to see some OC vampire with some gifts but its your choice. Keep up the amazing work.

hummmmm, love it! getting back to good stuff !

Obrigado pelo capítulo! Você irá manter o poder financeiro do Adam ou em algum momento ele irá perder tudo aos poucos? É meio edge, mas é interessante saber que ele é basicamente "dono" do mundo com os seus bancos

Great chapter.

thak you for the chapter man

Ahhhh im so excited

Take my stones

thanks for the chapter

Mira que el mc no termine con Alice seria perfecto 👍 Ya que en todos los FF alice siempre termina siendo la compañera del mc y la verdad que aburre 😒 Pero esta historia hasta el momento esta muy bien y pediría que siguiera asi 👍

thanks for the chapter. I have a feeling that the story with Adam will converge with the story of Carlisle.

Thanks for the chapter!

Thanks for chapter

I thank you for the chapter.