Comments of chapter undefined of The Immortal (twilight fanfiction)

I really don’t like Henry and John. I assume you’re trying to make two ignorant characters with development to grow. But they don’t seem ignorant, they seem stupid. They don’t add value to the story. And I don’t know if you’re trying to pass them off as comedic relief, but it just falls kind of flat. Just my thoughts tho. Plus the mc doesn’t seem smart regurgitating definitions that sound like a google search awnser.

Thanks for the chapter

Btw has the mc not even had one sexual partner since his whole 4k+ years of reincarnation? Like surly he must get some every so often right?

I thank you for the chapter.

Boring

thanks for the chapter

Loving it, please continue!

Thanks for the chapter. RosaliexAdam

Thanks for chapter

Thanks for the chapter

moving too slow. you need to timeskip soon.

TFTC

thanks for the chapter

Thanks for chapter