Comments of chapter undefined of The Immortal (twilight fanfiction)

I'll be pretty disappointed if he lets the disrespect stand just like that. The Volturi needs some spanking. 👏🏼

So he does nothing? He got attacked several times and he runs away? but hey he got a superpower, oh wait he already has superpowers. This story is just getting more and more contrived and forced perspective all leading up to a goal that stopped making sense long ago. A better conflict resolution would have been better and more believable and exciting, not this forced drama nonsense.

Pathetic.. He lives long enough to be super pathetic as a superpower

The Aura reminds me of Hunter x Hunter in which as it was unlocked it kept leaking leaving him weak until either the system or his subconscious stopped the leak.

bro just got disrespected like crazy! He may have lost the battle but he can still win the war.

Awesome! thanks!

there is a lot to learn and a lot to gain and enjoy in the world. I hope the MC isn't shipped with anyone. Let him be a lone wolf enjoying life to its fullest, traveling, eating delicacies etc. Even if he is to be shipped with someone it shouldn't be a Cullen because that is what I see in every twilight fanfiction on this app. Please create your own character for Adam but I'd much rather prefer he be alone

it's really cool and creative that you made Adam's blood dangerous to vampires. I can't wait for Adam's interaction with the werewolves ancestors, we also need to know what it does to them

that was a good power, not too over the top while still being powerful and versatile, I can't wait to read more 👍

thanks for the chapter 👍👍

so is he a vampire now? or just an immortal human with aura powers?

pathetic

Is it just me or is telekinesis better? 😮‍💨

I thank you for the chapter.

tftc~~~○●

Aura is the manifestation of our soul. It bears our burdens and shields our hearts. (RWBY) The power to manipulate the subtle, luminous radiation that surrounds a person or object. Variation of Energy Manipulation, Field Manipulation and Life-Force Manipulation.

Tq for the chapter anda hard work