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Comments of chapter undefined of The Immortal (twilight fanfiction)

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Glutenous_titan
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Oh man I wanted him to be something like the oldest human alive because you know "Adam"

VINCI88
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It would be funny if the Bible had a physical description of Adam, pale skin and silver hair. More fun if a vampire with the power to know if someone is lying asks: Was your body created by God?

Beans_on_a_tree:he will be, after the Romanian Arc he, Julius and Jane will start traveling, in their travels the MC will get his hands on a bible and read it, he will be in it as Adam the first man.
Daoist21eild
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I hope he still stays human and the venom just activates his powers

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Tyfli_Barda
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This whole situation feels contrived and stupid. Whatever reason he's excusing himself against the Romani Coven can be used against the Volturi as both are monsters, he is aware of their future and danger. His reasoning doesn't make sense and hasn't made sense since he started waiting for them to build their forces, doing nothing than just playing monopoly for several centuries. And him just letting them bait him and attack him and just allowing it, knowing full well that they would try he should have demolished their forces as a show of force from the very beginning. As I said nothing of this makes any sense.

Sulaiman_Bah_3964
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I wish his blood kills the vampire and he f**ks up aro

ShadedSoul
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Hmm I think the Author is just planning for the MC to gain the or some special vampire powers like (tele, mind control, elemental control or something) but I don't really think the MC will become a vampire he might be like Blade (the vampire hunter) n be a day walker (n still have his blood that might be poisonous to vampires) as a day walker he can now feed on blood if needed n now make his own coven by bitting others to make normal vampires that (might have a normal or for him bitting they will have a better chance to awaken new powers when he turns (MC should with his age/ n less need for blood, already have great control so won't get into a blood frenzy when trying to turn some1 unlike his friend) my thoughts

WolfinsteinLives
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It would be pretty cool if his blood is an Anti-thesis to supernatural stuff.For example if something like a Vampire were to drink his blood they would either age rapidly, crumble and turn to dust, or self combust.Stuff along that line.

illu0
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Bro nah he basically just got btched bc of that bite

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Bnathann
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it just seems dumb that they keep pushing him when they know he can just kill them.

Kacper_Furude
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When vampire bite him at the same time he can grab his head and tear it off. Would

Kinssanit
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What rubbish. took all of a character's growth and threw it in the trash . ignoring all other senses. incredible strength and speed and reaction time

Humbuub
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He knew that the Voulturi would win, why even bother? If he wants to send a message, might as well do it after the war. This just doesn't make any sense.

Blackstarbor
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Man at last. I was already starting to get bored that the mc was so submissive.

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Jollybee
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Well i dont have much thoughts on this, only going to be upset if a few things happen. If mc gets nerfed ima be angry, if this creates a super vamp villan ima be angry, if this destroys what he built for 4k years ima be angry. If this even effects him negatively ima be pretty upset.

GawS
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thanks for the chapter 👍👍

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CICADA_XI
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we shall have words sir

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Diegoa
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Thanks for the Chapter

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DuchessKolslaw
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Ahmed_Maged
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Sukuna power

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CulturedOne
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Happy New Year to my Brothers N' Sisters in Culture coming from the Philippines

Irishdamned
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I thank you for the chapter.