Comments of chapter undefined of The Immortal (twilight fanfiction)

I was gonna say, at some point, he needs to let his emotions flow

best chapter

thanks for the chapter author please keep up the good work well done always hate people who try to kill innocent and hate whole group because of individuals .Judge each person individually not based on some biased criteris.

I still say it's weird that it's thousands of years old. And don't be strong. It doesn't have magic or anything. He's basically a normal person who lives like a normal person and does absolutely nothing to get stronger. More than 4 thousand years and it is still the same as at the beginning.

Thank you for the update. I will admit that I was hoping to see the mc meet with the voltori this chap and see how he reacts to them, but the MC interaction with Jane was so needed as she needed to understand that not all people are bad and they should help those in need.

So the AI ​​can render him unconscious if he feels too many emotions? What if he was in a fight?

thanks for the chapter 👍👍👍

Bro, Good luck to you, Author. You're writing the story as you want. But, I think this story is not for me. 4k+ years old, and MC goes into emotional rant because of a statement. He should be a wise old man-type of person. Plus, 4k+ years old. MC has nothing to show for it. He is rich, he has 1 person (now maybe 2) that follow him ...... That's it. 4k+ years to plan, create a network of allies, create his own organisation of vampires (maybe?), amass power, take over the vampire world. Nothing!! For the past 10 or so chapters, there has been no progress in story also. This reads like a normal guy, in a medieval world with a few mentions of vampires thrown in. That's it!! There's nothing interesting also. If not vampires, maybe there are changes in history, in the world. No!! The MC has literally no impact anywhere. What's the use of such an MC? Sorry, Author, I wish you good luck 👍👍. But, I'll drop this story.

Huh could have just told her she's walking the path towards being the very thing that she hates instead of that huge emotional rant, kinda weird someone who is thosuands of years old could explode like that would have thought he'd have better control over his emotions and himself.

wow another chapter ehh, lucky me 😌😌😌 Thank you for the chapter Author-san ❣️❣️❣️

the best bruh but me personally Jane gotta go 🤣🤣

quick question: will there be alt. pov sections in this story or will this be from only 1 point of view

Brilliant idea, I like your way to bring back Jane's "humanity". Will also help to integrate them as a group, a team, a family... Brilliant!

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Thanks for the chapter

I thank you for the chapter.

tftc~~~○●

Gracias por el cap , me pregunto si ya está el papá de edward con los volturi y si es así seria genial que se una a la pequeña familia del mc !

at lest can u give ability. I suggest you give ability to copy other ability

Thanks for chapter