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Comments of chapter undefined of The Immortal (twilight fanfiction)

1mZ1ad
1mZ1adLv111mZ1ad

thank you for the chapter author 🙏🙏

I_dont_believe_it
I_dont_believe_itLv14I_dont_believe_it

I was gonna say, at some point, he needs to let his emotions flow

Barth0ld
Barth0ldLv2Barth0ld

best chapter

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system
systemLv4system

thanks for the chapter author please keep up the good work well done always hate people who try to kill innocent and hate whole group because of individuals .Judge each person individually not based on some biased criteris.

Blackstarbor
BlackstarborLv1Blackstarbor

I still say it's weird that it's thousands of years old. And don't be strong. It doesn't have magic or anything. He's basically a normal person who lives like a normal person and does absolutely nothing to get stronger. More than 4 thousand years and it is still the same as at the beginning.

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Kinginthenorth21
Kinginthenorth21Lv4Kinginthenorth21

Thank you for the update. I will admit that I was hoping to see the mc meet with the voltori this chap and see how he reacts to them, but the MC interaction with Jane was so needed as she needed to understand that not all people are bad and they should help those in need.

MathGojo
MathGojoLv1MathGojo

So the AI ​​can render him unconscious if he feels too many emotions? What if he was in a fight?

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GawS
GawSLv5GawS

thanks for the chapter 👍👍👍

SHCH7
SHCH7Lv1SHCH7

Bro, Good luck to you, Author. You're writing the story as you want. But, I think this story is not for me. 4k+ years old, and MC goes into emotional rant because of a statement. He should be a wise old man-type of person. Plus, 4k+ years old. MC has nothing to show for it. He is rich, he has 1 person (now maybe 2) that follow him ...... That's it. 4k+ years to plan, create a network of allies, create his own organisation of vampires (maybe?), amass power, take over the vampire world. Nothing!! For the past 10 or so chapters, there has been no progress in story also. This reads like a normal guy, in a medieval world with a few mentions of vampires thrown in. That's it!! There's nothing interesting also. If not vampires, maybe there are changes in history, in the world. No!! The MC has literally no impact anywhere. What's the use of such an MC? Sorry, Author, I wish you good luck 👍👍. But, I'll drop this story.

Xedornox
XedornoxLv1Xedornox

Huh could have just told her she's walking the path towards being the very thing that she hates instead of that huge emotional rant, kinda weird someone who is thosuands of years old could explode like that would have thought he'd have better control over his emotions and himself.

JugdementCale
JugdementCaleLv13JugdementCale

wow another chapter ehh, lucky me 😌😌😌 Thank you for the chapter Author-san ❣️❣️❣️

ZaXan
ZaXanLv3ZaXan

the best bruh but me personally Jane gotta go 🤣🤣

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theanimemail
theanimemailLv10theanimemail

quick question: will there be alt. pov sections in this story or will this be from only 1 point of view

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SpeedyG
SpeedyGLv10SpeedyG

Brilliant idea, I like your way to bring back Jane's "humanity". Will also help to integrate them as a group, a team, a family... Brilliant!

SriRaghav
SriRaghavLv13SriRaghav

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Granville4554
Granville4554Lv15Granville4554

Thanks for the chapter

Irishdamned
IrishdamnedLv14Irishdamned

I thank you for the chapter.

Insane_Fantasy
Insane_FantasyLv4Insane_Fantasy

tftc~~~○●

xcevia
xceviaLv1xcevia

Gracias por el cap , me pregunto si ya está el papá de edward con los volturi y si es así seria genial que se una a la pequeña familia del mc !

Omegalumder87aplha
Omegalumder87aplhaLv4Omegalumder87aplha

at lest can u give ability. I suggest you give ability to copy other ability

Zero93
Zero93Lv6Zero93

Thanks for chapter