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Comments of chapter undefined of The Immortal (twilight fanfiction)

Tam132
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good chapter.

RobertMacPounce2
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Alice

Flickerb
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Maybe make a new girl and make her a vampire not a wolf the wolfs age innless you want to have the MC watch his wife die of old age.

BigBoobs
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NOT ALICE OR ROSALIE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!

Nacho_Ramallo
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leah

m3gah1tss
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One of the Denali, they are never used. Alice is annoying, soo tired of it. Go for Tanya, or all 3 Denalis, or even Kate, but Tanya best girl.

DaoistJT1aJW
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One question: will MC be completely human or will he become a wolf or vampire in the future before canon?, and for his companion, anyone but Alice and Bela

Crom_Darkstar
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Alice and if he is greedy maybe Rosalie too

alexis_vasquez_0632
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Alecia or one of the Denali

Bharadwaz_Poleru
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Rosalie ....

Readtilltheybleed
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Alice and Selene…

Xedornox
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Wahab_adebanjo
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doesn't he have an ability like the vampires do?

Irishdamned
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I thank you for the chapter.

Zero93
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Thanks for chapter

PhantomNite629
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thx for the chap

Azathoth2
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Thank you for the chapter 🥰

EvilPenguin_666
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CM15
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Tanya o Rosalie

yagami_void
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thanks for the chapter

christian_rawson
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Like it please do more of this story and hope you have a great day