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Comments of chapter undefined of Harry Potter: Another Chance

Khaz_
Khaz_Lv13Khaz_

Lily has lived in the magical world for 20 years and still doesn't know the basic stuff about contracts? Also, her angry reactions are a bit immature, I could see teenager Hermione reacting like that, not a mother of 3 children in her thirties.

MrCoconut
MrCoconutLv14MrCoconut

You seem to have an issue where whenever a sentence ends with "-in" it autocorrects to "-ing". Are you able to edit that out? It changes Slytherin to Slythering or goblin to gobling. Thanks for the chapter!

maskhara
maskharaLv13maskhara

the worst kind of story development.... what is the point of this nonsense? there could have been a thousand ways of bringing them together now its just cheap and forced... even though i hate the grengrass ship... the grengrass ship because of convoluted political reasons that dont hold up to scrutiny is beyond deplorable....

dscot345
dscot345Lv12dscot345

James is stupid for listening to his wife. he must know how his world works. He must know the value of of the packet. Talked to Harry, he knows he’s on board. I’ll be honest with you. I’m not sure I like this portrayal of Lily. It's probably is a more true portrayal than in other stories you think it’s funny. Yeah you think it’s funny you think it’s a hilarious. I don’t exactly know what status the potters have in this world. also being ignorant about politics isn’t a trait to be admired.

Finnish_man
Finnish_manLv4Finnish_man

Sebastian greengrass i dont know if i have read it in anohter fic but i like it

LeonardoDiCaprio1
LeonardoDiCaprio1Lv4LeonardoDiCaprio1

Tiktark
TiktarkLv14Tiktark

the green grass bloodline has been cursed with a blood curse so any family introducing them into theirs will only face detriments not benefits to said family.

Yui_Sealfat
Yui_SealfatLv3Yui_Sealfat

Thank for good chapter.

AvidReader962
AvidReader962Lv14AvidReader962

Fun chapter

Pedro_Llerenas
Pedro_LlerenasLv14Pedro_Llerenas

great job can't wait for the next one 🖤.

Visrow
VisrowLv14Visrow

Thanks for the great chapter!!!

Eleesar_Talcontar
Eleesar_TalcontarLv1Eleesar_Talcontar

Irishdamned
IrishdamnedLv14Irishdamned

I thank you for the chapter.

INDRA32
INDRA32Lv5INDRA32

Thanks for the chapther

Memes_for_dreams
Memes_for_dreamsLv14Memes_for_dreams

Tftc

Klynt_The_Frog
Klynt_The_FrogLv4Klynt_The_Frog

Thanks for the chapter :)

shinai
shinaiLv4shinai

thx for the chapters

Kranox
KranoxLv4Kranox

Thanks for the chapter

marawa
marawaLv2marawa

Lancelot Greengrass!!

Siobhann_MK
Siobhann_MKLv13Siobhann_MK

Thanks for the chapter