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Comments of chapter undefined of Mind Controlled My Way To Revenge

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B0mbaCl0ck
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Honestly.. My advice is to make this life MC's chance to get revenge while helping the people who David wronged in the past.If every single girl who was harmed in the past by him and his lackeys, including the teachers, were harmed in this life as well before MC can even do anything, then there would be no satisfaction for the outcome.The true satisfaction is when MC can save the victims and hot teachers and takes them for himself, before David or his lackeys even put their hands on them, not after they 'used' them to the limit.Tragic victims aren't fun, and there is enough darkness in MC's past already. There should also be some light, since this life should be the one where he changes things around no?Like that Emily, it would be nice if she weren't already David's lover, but someone whom he pursues, since she's been in school for barely 6 months.Just some advice, since schoolgirls should mostly be V's and untouched for the novels to be enjoyable.Making it a cesspool already, and thrusting MC into it would make the present dirty as well.Just some advice, since the feeling you give me is that in the 6 months MC was not there, those guys already had their way with all the hot women in the school, leaving nothing clean for MC. It would beat the purpose of a Harem story, and revenge can be taken for the past life.

GilgameshTheFirst
GilgameshTheFirstAuthorGilgameshTheFirst

thanks for your advice , I will put this in mind and somehow try to change the approach of this novel a little 😅,though i may not guarantee that Kazuma revenge won't be extreme

Shadow5789
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Nice 👍