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Comments of chapter undefined of Kido System in Bleach

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Ozem
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Dude, I think you're overestimating what low level spells can do, because that way a 99 hado will be able to level an entire country

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DaoistobowWn
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So I like the idea of your story, but I can't help but feel that the narrative is pushing for the MC to be a Gary Stu. The only reason he can act like he does in a fight is because he started off with Captain Level energy against much weaker enemies, Which is why it was refreshing to see Urahara call him weak. Maybe this is just leading to him fighting someone he can't win and change his mindset, I don't know. Anyway this is one of the first times I've seen a system bleach story so I just wanted to put in some input. Good job so far.

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Keep it up