Comments of chapter undefined of Supreme Transmigrator-Axton Zavier

I hope whenever MC return to his real world, he should first find this woman and 'tame' her properly.

Okay, I feel bad for Martin. His father?!! That's tough and first thing I'll do if it's me is to come back for that chic😤

Your Prologue is ❤️❤️, and I don't see any problems there

Okay... chapter was okay, description fleshed out, plot shoots in on time, and the cliffhanger was well placed. lets's see how it goes

better but when he goes to bathroom should be i wonder where the chick wearing red went he thought to himself

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okay, first chapter is quiet impressive

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Awesome read, I could literally envision the scene... nice work

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needs some work first few parts confusing if sections of night club or club house not important why mention it??? why was she in the men's bathroom before he entered but he didn't see her?