Comments of chapter undefined of DC:Reborn as SHAZAM

Grammar could use some work, basically edited by someone or chatgpt, it will go a long way to make this a pro work. Having said that, I am liking the MC and how he thinks, thats like 90% of the work if you dont nerf him for plot situations. Just as the Sins started talking all I could think: Why would he get tempted? He he Shazam, he has power, he is smart now, he can make money easily, he can get women..... what are the Sins going to do? And you had the MC say exactly that, smart, well done! Then the immediate plan to lock the place up, its not even genius, its what a normal human (of earth, not comic book) would think. Now due to his intelligence he will find a good way to lock the place up. Keep it up.

Thanks for the chapter 👍