David_555
the conversations feel so unnatural. Like robots communicating with each other, completely emotionless
his father was weak then and he doesn't have the rinnegan right
greatest talent?he couldn't even save himself from drug lord,what a joke
Hey author, I'm gonna write a sentence the way you do, to see if it reads out well in your head. The day was.. great and the sun in the sky.... so clear... I wonder if that guy is okay..... This is how your punctuation feels like. Horrible to read.
Thx for the chapter
Thxs for the chap
Great chapter
I beg the author to continue this ff
thanks for the update