Comments of chapter undefined of Naruto: A Different Time
Naruto: A Different Time
DesMark
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Just my view of the story, writing the same thing that happens in the original story only drags this story down in my view, I like to see Mc changing the world around him (if possible without the butterfly effect excuse that some authors use just to try to create problems), if it's to see the same story that happens in the original naruto I feel a loss, not that you want to create a new world but talking about things that have already been told excessively seems like filler, and I followed the other story in the world of naruto who apparently is being dumped by you, then starting all over again what expectation do you want me to have that this one will end, do you have plans until the end of this story or did you just start by having a good idea? Even more so if this spam of secondary character plots continues, I don't need to see Mc one hundred percent of the time but I also don't want to read a story that I don't see how it impacts him directly or was already told in the original and everyone knows the result, like Madara's introduction to the Plot was cool, but in the end, everything will remain the same because Mc is doing nothing looking at the moon.
