ElectricLuna
I've noticed this since your first novel, but you're really not that talented when it comes to fights.From the moment they left, all i've seen is fear and desperation, panic, and not a good thought put into dealing with their enemies.Garnt and Rona were more like headless chickens not knowing what to do, not thinking things properly. Fights are not won through determination, and Garnt was shown initially to be experienced. Where was his weapon? He had to look around for tools when going into enemy teritory? That's dumb... Feels like all the skill he showed in the village was useless waste, just to show off, when in fact he is completely useless in a fight.Again, the poison, he could have stabbed the neck, not the arm, so you're forcing situations without thinking things.through.This was the most out of character event for Garnt and his people.. Truly pathetic waste.