Comments of chapter undefined of Eternal Saṃsāra: The Wanderer of Worlds
Eternal Saṃsāra: The Wanderer of Worlds
Master4thWall
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While the chapter and the writing itself was great, I can't help but feel there's an element missing somewhere. Like, it shouldn't have been the White Tiger Icon to make Aqua a Sage. Or, it shouldn't have been the only one. Moreover, the fact that Aqua's ascension occurred in the Underworld, in such a manner, doesn't sit well for some reason. It might be that the author is setting Aqua up for failure, or that the pacing feels rushed in general.To clarify, I've given my opinion to encourage discussion, and not disparage the novel. Thoughts on it would be welcome.
It makes sense why you'd feel that way. The Crown Icon is a much more attractive choice here, or maybe even the Time Icon since we are dealing with Time Devils, or maybe a new Icon could have been introdiuced. But they have answer, at least one, which you can use to connect the others, in the near future chapters
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