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Apparently there are confused persons about the content in this chapter, so I will leave a counterargument here so the Autor don't lose motivation because having to answer to such persons. : The trap thing that this person writes about is just a mistake on his part. Apparently it is difficult for him to understand that there can be beautiful Man ♂️, think about cloud Strife, Sephiroth or in real life a Korean K-pop Man. His disregard about the world items is hilarious, because they can do absurd things or be just an enhanced version of a cash shop item, the possibilities are infinite and the original novel is very vague about ALL of them what brings creative liberties. Which can be veryfied through the long list of Overlord Fan-Fics.
I'm really enjoying it and I'm looking forward to seeing the construction of the base and NPCs. As for their construction, I’m not going to suggest appearance, that’s up to you… but if we are going to give suggestions, I would say to follow more or less the organizational pattern that Nazarick has, an area/function administrator of approximately level 80, about 3 or 5 assistants of level 65~70, and basic employees of level 50, 35, 10 taking on diverse roles… This is my suggestion, I hope it helps something
Great I love the concept of ownership from a world Enemy abode! For me that place must be as amazing as a newly conquered Nazarick. The citadel of Sin sounds great and very Big, a proper place to create sub areas with crazy and dark Lore, like fighting colosseum ( infinite possibilities for NPC), a nightclub neighborhood with mafia bosses (NPC), maybe something like an automaton underground Arena in which the winner of 1000 tournaments was elected as guardian of the Area, as you just read in this comment the versatility of the claimed Dungeons of our MC Lucian are amazing.
So hes never rejoined in his is not an overlord fan fiction. The overlord's Ainz. I like this story but I pointed it out and other comments. I've made on other fan fictions. Don't call it a fan fiction for a series. That includes a main character and not have them really in it. That much as I can't even one peace without luffy. Having DXD high school without Issai.
Love the novel hope this gives u inspiration to continue even if this is a bit of a slow start it’s still a good fanfic. But if u want NPC recommendations then why not add ppl like Unohana Retsu, Kaguya Otsutsuki, Esdeath or Mirko(MHA) or something like that for the harem. (Not saying u gotta add zanpakutos or dragon slayer magic or even quirks and teigu, especially for Lucian but it would be different and kinda cool but up to you).If u want male characters however, then wy not fun ppl like Natsu&Gray, or even Zoro&Sanji. They are all strong characters (perfect for NPC’s) and have funny interactions and stuff (similar to Albedo and Altear in the Overlord anime). Either way that’s my take and recommendations hope u got enough power stones to keep going and good job my friend I’m enjoying this fanfic so far despite what others might say or think.