Grispera
Author, you should consider changing the name of this novel. It sounds like a title for a female-centric novel. If you want your book to become famous, choose a title that includes words like "cultivation" or "harem." Additionally, you should consider changing the cover page. Many perverts won't read your book because it doesn't have a poster featuring a woman with large assets. By the way, I have added it to my reading list, but I currently don't have enough time to start reading it. I will begin reading it when I have a little more free time.
This really needs an edit. The grammar and choice of words are poor in many of the sentences; an example is when mentioning the events of using a "chopper" to get to a "port." Grammar aside, helicopter and harbor for the choice words would fit better when describing events occurring instead of slang words like chopper. First impressions are important.