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Comments of chapter undefined of Naruto: I Quit

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DarkTiding
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To get to the point the point the title of the novel really pulled me in, but from reading so far it is not what I expected. I imagined the MC living through Naruto’s dark life as a summary and the story picking up when he ultimately makes the decision to leave Konoha. But all I have read so far is things that should have been told in a flashback summary. The chapters are too short with nothing interesting happening. Everything is just information of thing we already know with no change. Except for his bloodline that is a nice and different perspective for the MC. My recommendation would be that if your going to keep the same pace age wise then start making changes to canon or have some other character interactions. His basic skills should be learned and told in bref mentionings not whole chapters ( cause chapters are small).

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LeonardoDiCaprio1
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good chapter keep it up

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butterfly_sunlight
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more pls

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Anonny_Anonymous
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