Comments of chapter undefined of The First Soul (40k)

The First Soul (40k)

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KumThroneLv2KumThrone

First we nerf the MC, Then we disregard the MC in exchange of Creative lore dumps in the form of a story. Is this about the First Soul, or about The War in Heaven? Quite frankly, Are we even needing the MC at this point? What's special about him now? THE God thrown away into a mere C'Tan Prototype body. What now? Are we going to follow his "Oh SO FABULIOUS" adventures across the universe HE made? Sure he can Manipulate the warp, Woo-di-doo... And that changes what? He practically lost his place/And anything special once you nerfed him.

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KumThroneLv2KumThrone

I respect your writing, but this is just getting tedious. I came here to read about the MC, not Lore dumps and nerfs for the plot.

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Dao_LiLv10Dao_Li

I hope this ends soon. I'd rather see the mc not all this side stuff

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Gargamel72Lv6Gargamel72

Thanks for the chapter. As someone without a deep 40k lore knowledge, I like these chapters.

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Maximus_DukeLv3Maximus_Duke

Kinda boring without the mc, thanks for the chapter.

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WalterHeisenbergLv4WalterHeisenberg

Pick up the pace pls cuz I want the mc to come back and actually do something for once

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JarOfOzLv4JarOfOz

Thx for chp, caught up and im lovin it! Im treating this fic like a crash course on 40K lore lol

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GRANDMAESTA_30Lv13GRANDMAESTA_30

Thanks for the chapter 👍

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Arion_SturmklingeLv2Arion_Sturmklinge

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Rico321Lv5Rico321

Thanks

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Inferno873Lv4Inferno873

thanks for chapter :D

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Grey1Lv13Grey1

Tftc

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EvilPenguin_666Lv4EvilPenguin_666

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Daoist943346Lv1Daoist943346

TFTC

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Darkseid_Lv3Darkseid_

More

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Darkseid_Lv3Darkseid_

Man am just sad 😔 😟😱😭😢😩😰😓😟

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Bob_Bob_9594Lv1Bob_Bob_9594

Great chapter thank you 🙏

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cheeki_breekiLv13cheeki_breeki

jcuc9tx8t

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ncr_rangerLv13ncr_ranger

Hey, that’s pretty good

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DaoistrCfjYpLv15DaoistrCfjYp

Tftc

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DaoistF0koDDLv2DaoistF0koDD

¡Gracias por el capítulo! 😁 👍

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