Comments of chapter undefined of Human Of Rise In Against The Gods

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I got it from the wiki=The Nine Star Hegemon Body Art cultivates the power of Nine Stars and is condensed within the body. When all Nine Stars are formed, it is equivalent to possessing Nine Dantian. The most unique battle skill that comes with the Nine Stars is a Divine Ring that can extract power forcibly from the Heavens and a Star Battle Armor that greatly increases the users physical power. The technique is a heaven defying art that would destroy any other cultivator's Dantian if they were not selected automatically for practice. It seemed to be tailored to Long Chen's condition as he had no Dantian so the Nine Star Hegemon Body Art could not destroy it. Each Star requires a total of 9 Transformations, or 9 stages to obtain completion. The most unique aspect about the Nine Star Hegemon Body Art was that while ordinary cultivators had to cross only 9 Heavenstages for each cultivation realm, Long Chen has to go through 13 Heavenstages and his 13th Heavenstage is considered his Heavenly Tribulation Stage. However, after the 9th Heavenstage, from 10th to 13th Heavenstage, each advancement would be incredibly more difficult, but LC's power would also explosively leap.[2] Furthermore, when he had reached the tenth Heavenstage, his qi seas had instantly exploded in size. It was like a cup that had shattered; the limits of his qi seas were broken, allowing them to expand to a new level.[2]

I am out...entire family of oc with systems that make zero sense...the e tire fic became messy..

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thanks for the chapter... good day to all who read

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Si mal no recuerdo nine star hegemon body art es una técnica que permite la creación de 9 dantian en el cuerpo, lo cual le permite tener 9 veces más energía que una persona normal, además cómo es literal una técnica que desafía al cielo cada vez que el prota tenía que avanzar de reino enfrentaba una tribulación celestial incluso si ese avanze no ameritaba una tribulación, por eso el prota tuvo que entrenarse para obtener resistencia a los rayos y para poder usar los rayos cómo método para refinar su físico, por lo tanto cada vez que pasaba un reino utilizaba la tribulación celestial cómo un arma, ya que iba a la secta o familia que quería destruir los provocaba para que todos lo rodearan y avanzaba de reino y cómo era una tribulación divina destruía todo alrededor del prota eliminando a sus enemigos mientras el prota usaba los rayos para refinar su cuerpo y avanzar en su nivel de cultivo.

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Gracias por el capítulo

It somehow became even worse, this ff isn’t going to last. People don’t want this kind of story in ATG. And the grammar is abysmal. He, she, who? And sentences out of context. It shouldn’t be difficult to prof read or learn simple grammar, I can excuse much, but this shouldn’t even be a problem.