Comments of chapter undefined of The Village of Depravity

Man..I'm going to be honest, this writing style is really boring. Feels overdone in a way that takes away the enjoyment.. Feels souless, AI generated...I can't feel any passion put into it, and the descriptions feel mechanic. Every single line of dialogue comes with some description that tries to make everything feel heavy and deep.. There is no simplicity, and in this way, no beauty.Every time Arthur looks at something, he pierced veils of uncertainty, or shows unwavering determination or whatnot.. What's wrong with a normal look?