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Comments of chapter undefined of The Village of Depravity

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B0mbaCl0ck
B0mbaCl0ckLv15B0mbaCl0ck

Well, honestly, he hasn't even settled in the village, the story hasn't even begun nor has much of it been clear, and quite random. Adding an academy arc will only waste time, and separate him from his village of women, which, from what i can see, are quite hunted.If it's useless to him, then why add it? Better than that, he should act like a human being and actually build something with this village.. Not even developed, 27 chars without much development, most girls gotten randomly, let's focus on a development track and stop jumping from one thing to the next without any foundation to build upon.

Timmru
TimmruAuthorTimmru

Thank you for your feedback

Jared_Anderson
Jared_AndersonLv15Jared_Anderson

Thanks for the chap!