LotusLin
It's very easy to tell if an author is a big time reader by the way the write. Dialogue here is like one of the best I've read in my short time here. Tuzi's naiveness is evident in her speech and the Goddess's wiseness is evident in hers. I like the subtle indication that Tuzi hadn't seen a more stern side of her Goddess and was surprised when she did. Loved the chaps, thank you! Atp, it's already obvious that this book will be super successful, but congrsatulations.