Comments of chapter undefined of Bleach: From You to Me
Bleach: From You to Me
AKD_Khmer
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I’m ngl but feel when mc and yachiru get together is when ima drop this story. The paring doesn’t make much sense to me. If she wasn’t his disciple and his daughters sister then I could see it. Or if she was older When I read it I’m picturing them as kids around the mc and then trying to make yachiru be with the mc is kinda like a pedo In my mind ahaha But it’s like how will the two sisters call her in the future? Mother? How she was bought into the story the pairing just doesn’t match
Doesn’t matter much now haha but I would say personaly. Age wise you made it very hard on yourself As you made him out to be aincent like first soul in existence vibe it’s hard to find a suitable pairing. The closest one I saw that felt alright was that matriarch he knew. He is so respected it’s trying to find someone with that same reputation sort of. Hope this makes sense haha Currently I would say change love interest or don’t have one if you want to salvage it. Romance is very hard to write and it came make or break a great story
AKD_Khmer:Completely understandable. I also feel the same way even though I'm writing it like this. That sounds confusing now that I think about it. I'm playing more of a long term, slow burn kind of deal. If you don't mind, could you give a rough age that would be appropriate for the relationship's advancement? Say for instance, Yachiru is 20 now, if we gave her 80 more years would that suffice, or would it still be too strange? And believe me, I thought about the whole 'mother' and 'sister' situation. Do you feel like there is a possibility of the pairing being acceptable or is it simply unsalvageable? Thanks for letting me know your thoughts!