Friend Author, how about you make a synopsis that actually describes the story and not just write that it's a translation. Because when people look for stories what they'll see is : .....
Kindly change MC's name - sounds like a female! Why not choose a Japanese Name such as MUGEN KAMI (meaning ♾️-GOD)as it connects having his powers/abilities from SHINOBI-VERSE.
Ah, his name is Feng Yi, so this is a Chinese fanfiction, now I can get a rough idea of the future storyline, especially his view of the world and his attitude when he meets other people later.
1 chapter and I gave up, Chinese fanfic is always the same thing, the protagonist has to start strong in some way and have a cold heart, no developing him from the beginning, which is honestly boring