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Comments of chapter undefined of The Arrival of Naruto in the Marvel Universe

fixmalve
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Friend Author, how about you make a synopsis that actually describes the story and not just write that it's a translation. Because when people look for stories what they'll see is : .....

Pheonix_Ridone
Pheonix_RidoneLv4Pheonix_Ridone

kind land china? really so the 2 years of COVID and the death tolls conveniently skipped your memories?

ANANTA
ANANTALv4ANANTA

Kindly change MC's name - sounds like a female! Why not choose a Japanese Name such as MUGEN KAMI (meaning ♾️-GOD)as it connects having his powers/abilities from SHINOBI-VERSE.

aragis
aragisLv5aragis

charles boyles approves :D

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Yui_Sealfat
Yui_SealfatLv3Yui_Sealfat

Thank

Pendora10
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Ah, his name is Feng Yi, so this is a Chinese fanfiction, now I can get a rough idea of ​​the future storyline, especially his view of the world and his attitude when he meets other people later.

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_Alenkar
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Tigre_Negro008
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1 chapter and I gave up, Chinese fanfic is always the same thing, the protagonist has to start strong in some way and have a cold heart, no developing him from the beginning, which is honestly boring

YanYan94
YanYan94Lv3YanYan94

china is not a kind country ... that's bullshi*

Estelem_Shelym
Estelem_ShelymLv11Estelem_Shelym

Obrigada pelo capítulo

MorningWood_Dao
MorningWood_DaoLv5MorningWood_Dao

so many sudden changes of POVs. kinda irks me. stopping my reading flow. hope it gets better, if not, then I will just stop reading this.