Comments of chapter undefined of Hitman x Family

I like the concept sounds amazing.

Por concepto suena interesante y espero que autor no la dejes en el camino

Mc pic? I don't see. I don't have computer 😢

Nice grammar so far. Would recommend to tone down with the onomatopeias but author's have their preferences. Nevertheless an interesting story and a good first chapter!

Thanks for the chapter.

Why go for the most basic build character. No in depth description except he's handsome, silver hair, and crimson eyes. If that's not the most basic of basic bull i've ever read, then i don't know what is. Just give a little more umph to your description homie, and if you wouldn't mind something different, jesus. Have you ever seen red eyes irl? There disgusting, There not cool or mysterious. They make you look like your an emo or degenerate that wants attention.

Gracias por el capítulo, Cómo es el MC puedes enviar la foto por Aka ?

Que le quieres hacer a mi Kaguya

Tftc

Thanks for the chapter

Thank you for the chapter

awesome chapter I hope it continues

It sounds great but ambitious… I don’t know many people who can pull off a good crossover, especially with an anime like Oshi no ko. That said, I’m looking forward to getting proven wrong 😁.

Why didn't the MC suspect that they might not be his children? After all he claims to have used a condom, you can't go wrong with that.

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Ej koncepcja tego jest mega zajebista autor czekam na więcej maga pomysł jesteś geniuszem