Photosphere
This chapter seems out of character for Veyron. He lived an entire life as an adult. Now you have him fall in love with 3 young women he saved in 1 day? I know it's Boa Hancock... but still. I was really loving this story. But this chapter dampened my enthusiasm quite a bit. I will give it another chance, but if Veyron's character keeps going in this odd direction, I'll bow out. Cheers.