Comments of chapter undefined of Marvel : A Reptilian Adventure

i don't know what future vision you have for the fic but currently it just looks too chaotic. Characters popping out here and there. i hope we can see 🙈 an interesting development with all the characters involved. Thanks for the chapter

Hopefully the lizard brain can somewhat defeat telepathy otherwise peter is screwed, unless peters residul consciousness protects’grants’ mind

ufff i hope mc doesnt go there or else his Meta knowledge will doom him once xavier or emma read them, honestly this is something mc should priorize before going outside, Get a Psionic Shield to keep his secrets, maybe recalibrate his brain to make it safe, IDK. Altough i understand the relevance of the extrems suerum but it doesnt worth risking your secrets getting known by psionic mutants

thanx for the chapter

MC definitely needs to get Logan's Blood. Lizard's regeneration is nothing compared to Wolverine, but imagine what would happen if they were combined. MC will become unkillable

Although I don't think MC will become a Hero, but I think it would be smart to make yourself a Suit just in case you have to become a Person in Public. The Reptile suit from MK 1 is just perfect for MCs to hide their Identity 🤩

I hope the MC understands that the Lizard will not save him from the Inheritors, because they eat all Animal Totems, but they prefer Spiders. In the comics, Morlun seems to have devoured some Bird's Totem while searching for the Spider. The Raptor MC definitely outperforms not only the Raptor Connors of 616, but also many other Spider Totems, which already puts him in danger. Let's hope that the MC will have a Giant Lizard in the Head, which will protect the Mind of the MC from Telepaths

Oo, does Logan have his memories?

In this universe Shaw is the white king, so who is the black king?

Morse is a very easy language btw

Way to many characters being introduced right now.

Whilst Sébastien Shaw is supervising the mission ,but Emma Frost is cautious around NightCrawler Kurt Wagner ( but thoughts weren't like she expected them to be ) in his mind scape through Emma Frost mind reading .All according to Charles Xavier plan for the X man teamAnyway ,Emma Frost went to go deal with Black King Magneto at the Hellfire clubhouse .Erstwhile , Charles and Logan Howlett received Kurt Wagner telepathic message concerning Extemis serum ( which Ororo Monroe is watching over school ,despite Charles Xavier wanting to go with Logan on the mission . but Telepathic are psin and Ororo is the muscle ,besides Charles is needed there for any psychic attacks .While Logan suits up to go deal with Hellfire gang and Killian at the airport ,but unexpectedly A Spider-Gwen and Reptil Peter Parker are in the midst of the same upcoming collision at the meantime .Continue on Cheers !

Mc studying other totems is basically him becoming a lovecraftian horror , and i love the question of this ff that is " How far are you willing to go for power?" I hope Mc later on becomes an abomination. The relation ship between Mc and Gwe could be like a normal couple and at night when Gwen is doing the Hero work , mc could be like dexter. It would be pretty interesting if he hunts other Totems.

Thanks, waiting for more

Thanks for the great chapter!

TFTC

Thanks for the chapterWish you well authorKeep up the good work