Comments of chapter undefined of Atticus’s Odyssey: Reincarnated Into A Playground

Thanks for the chapters , so far the leader summit arc is really good I hope there will be a pov from people watching the leader summit from outside (I quite like side characters and extra reactions to what MC does , for exemple if he takes on the whole camp by himself their reaction in disbelief and Avalon or Magnus proud of him , or for exemple Jared wanting to fight atticus)

As someone who is very picky, I surprisingly don’t have much to say about this novel in terms of criticism. I don’t really think the pace is bad at all, it’s chapter 450 and he’s already expert plus rank. That’s not fast or slow in my opinion. I can admit I don’t care much for the academy arc, at least not enough that I want him to be there all 3 years. It’s not bad necessarily but him facing off against other youths of the human race is just disrespectful to him in every way. If you make him stay past his first year, I will definitely be severely disappointed. I would really like him to take the route Issabella wants him to take in joining the military. But yeah, I think you are doing a great job, it’s obviously not perfect but nothing has annoyed me greatly this far.

A example of horrible that we are complaining is chapter 438, u took a entire chapter just to describe Atticus entrance, which wasl uninteresting to say the least. A entire chapter its too much for that. The disappointment hits hard when we are so excited to read.

Spending too many coin for chapters filled with details… starting to become too costly and not worth it. Either make your chapters longer to compensate, reduce the extra details or release more chapter but make them cheaper

the pace isn't the problem it's that the chapters are kinda small for the amount of detail . i love the story don't get me wrong and I think you're doing great . one other thing that i personally like is that when a reader has an omnipotent view of the story some times . like in this case in some arcs you can do it(with the pov from teachers discussing ), what I mean by this is why is there another race in the leader summit? is it some sort of deal with the academy did they breach the portal? stuff like that. You can't do it for the main reason of the story tho like why Atticus got thrown in here . sorry for the long post. just what i think would make the story better , not everyone has to agree.

I love all the little things you describe especially when I do cut back to see other people's reactions to what Atticus does keep on doing what you're doing bro the novel is amazing and I love it if you ever get published I'm buying the book 😂