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  • Spic1503
    Spic15037d
    Replied to DaoistpjUWEL

    I understand, i guess i’m just disappointed since I was expecting a kingdom building/city building genre with the title. Since it only an OP caracter fighting non stop everywhere and he abandoned his city I wont be spending coins anymore since its not my style. i would just like to give my opinion. Since this is your novel, stick to your plan and whay you want to create, doesnt mean thay someone didnt like it that someone else wont. Just like what your original readers didnt like, i liked. What I like, they dislike. I found the first 75 chapters to be the best and wished you would of stayed the same 🥲

    Building your own super empire from scratch
    Fantasy · DaoistpjUWEL
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  • Spic1503
    Spic15038d
    Posted

    Title of the book can be misleading. MC isnt building an Empire, he is barely building a city. The city is being build in the background without us knowing which I find terrible. Where the city building chapters or empire building??? Why the hell would he chill in other cities except the one hes building. It had a great start but everything went downhill when you stop focusing on character development and empire building development. I think the title is clickbait and false. Get back to empire/city building and focusing on leveing his city to see his GF from the start again

    Building your own super empire from scratch
    Fantasy · DaoistpjUWEL
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  • Spic1503
    Spic150319d
    Posted

    Great story other than the fact that the author forgets alots of information such as in the early chapters, there was a 30mil for the fortune spinning wheel that he forgot to account to, two other 10mill coin from two other wheel spin, forgot about his raising tactics to level two and also weapon proficiency to level 3. All of this within 200 chapters.. If you keep going like this, story will become boring to read since we never know what else you will forget

    Surviving the Zombie Apocalypse With My Military System
    Sci-fi · Faux1231
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  • Spic1503
    Spic150319d
    Commented

    He raised his weapon proficiency to level 3 and author still forgot about it…. He forgot he raised his tactic for lvl 2 and also forgot about 50mil in coin in the early chapters.. What else will he forget?

    Skills: Weapon Proficiency Level 2, Melee Proficiency Level 3, Driving Proficiency Level 2. Tactical Mastery Level 1.
    Surviving the Zombie Apocalypse With My Military System
    Sci-fi · Faux1231
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  • Spic1503
    Spic150320d
    Replied to Oakley_Tallent

    Not everyone are good in math or remembering the rewards your give to your own mc lol

    "I have about 70,270,000 gold coins," Richard replied, looking back at the screen. "With this discount, it will feel like I have double that amount to spend. So, let's go?"
    Surviving the Zombie Apocalypse With My Military System
    Sci-fi · Faux1231
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  • Spic1503
    Spic150320d
    Replied to Oakley_Tallent

    The first 30mil was from spinning the wheel after beating the behemot. The two other 10 mill are also from spinning the wheel. The author forgot a total of 50mill in reward coin so i find it ridiculous he would even give them out as reward only to not take them into count

    Current gold balance: 70,270,000 gold coins] 
    Surviving the Zombie Apocalypse With My Military System
    Sci-fi · Faux1231
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  • Spic1503
    Spic150320d
    Commented

    Whats the point of receiving cash if the author forget about calculating it in mc total gold coin count

    [You have won 10,000,000 gold coins!]
    Surviving the Zombie Apocalypse With My Military System
    Sci-fi · Faux1231
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  • Spic1503
    Spic150320d
    Commented

    Didnt he increase his troops to 600 already?

    Summoned Troops: 415/850
    Surviving the Zombie Apocalypse With My Military System
    Sci-fi · Faux1231
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  • Spic1503
    Spic150320d
    Commented

    Wasnt his tactic mastery upgraded to lvl 2?

    Skills: Weapon Proficiency Level 2, Melee Proficiency Level 2, Driving Proficiency Level 2. Tactics Mastery Level 1.
    Surviving the Zombie Apocalypse With My Military System
    Sci-fi · Faux1231
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  • Spic1503
    Spic15031mth
    Commented

    Spending too many coin for chapters filled with details… starting to become too costly and not worth it. Either make your chapters longer to compensate, reduce the extra details or release more chapter but make them cheaper

    Ch 450 Sneaking
    Atticus’s Odyssey: Reincarnated Into A Playground
    Fantasy · RealmWeaver
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