Comments of chapter undefined of Chronicles of the Multiversal Wanderer

As a recommendation: the template should give the protagonist certain abilities or transformations the more percentage I achieved, This to be considered a true template, Example: 25% combat techniques 50% demonic aura 75% demonic form and laser gaze 100% all of Jin Kazama's combat techniques

I tried, you seem to change the MC and the system per chapter or scene as you please. MC goes from adult, to child acting, to stupid to genius depending on the situation. Also, the system, you give him a template.... which he has to train to get, I can only assume the power he gets from the percentage is far greater than the training he does, otherwise the template is pointless since he has to train anyway. Now you start saying he can't punch, he can't do one inch punch, he can't fight. What is the system for? How is it a template if you get a fighter expert but no fighting skills? Just the power? thats not a template. It feels like you started the novel with an idea: template, then decided he needs training because the original movie had it, and just completely ignored the system purpose, so now the system basically got a nerf....until you need a power up an suddenly it makes the MC better, this is AFTER he defeated the Five.......with what skills? I mean, Shifu just told him he can't punch or fight, but he defeated the Five which are basically super"humans", yea... It's a lot of plot that makes no sense with details that keep conflicting. I want the MC to be cool, suave, strong, courageous and have game but I also want him to be stupid sometime, weak so he can train to be stronger, cowardly, nervous, awkward. This are all things that were in the novel, and its only chapter 12.

So the enemy is days away, the MC needs training but they just took a 3 day journey... that sounds like a bad choice of words in the chapter. should have been "went up the mountain".

Hum...

sephiroth next template

Gracias por el capitulo aquí tai lung leyendo lo que escribiste XD

Go change the appearance of the Mc to each world because it doesn't seem practical

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Thanks for the chapter more chapters pls

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