The only thing that does not convince me is the robberies, I understand that it is interesting, but he is so OP that it seems ridiculous to do robberies, he already has a lot of money and could control the city, so if you were in his situation and already had everything . You would risk your life, being able to die in the robbery or be caught by the police for a robbery that at most will give you less money than the 1% that you already have.
Tired of the monologue and summary stuff..it doesnt read like.a story when its just summary and monologue nonstop. Actually have him do stuff instead of just summarizing stuff. Plus chapters way too short for this type of story. Makes it very lacking in details. I love idea but so far kinda disappointed